Paul, Some of these have great character and energy to them. I want you to avoid packing too many drawings onto a single page. You have a tendency to try to fill up a page, as opposed to making one or two sketches, then moving on to the next page. The uprigt sketch is great - don't let the facial features go, though - and try to compose the drawing on the page. If you stop packing drawings together, your compositions won't be forced so much to the margains.
Paul,
ReplyDeleteSome of these have great character and energy to them. I want you to avoid packing too many drawings onto a single page. You have a tendency to try to fill up a page, as opposed to making one or two sketches, then moving on to the next page.
The uprigt sketch is great - don't let the facial features go, though - and try to compose the drawing on the page. If you stop packing drawings together, your compositions won't be forced so much to the margains.